Short story: “The Testimonie of Alyss Teeg”
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“The Testimonie of Alyss Teeg,” by Carys Davies
Pages 25–37 in the magazine, maybe 3000 words?
A fine, cruel story.
The eccentric spelling and capitalization seem to insist on the authenticity of the narrative voice. I’m not sure if that’s a good thing; it made me pay closer attention to the narrator’s diction and syntax, asking myself whether someone could have written this without being what I think of as fully literate, questioning, doubting.
The word “testimony” suggests that Alyss is presenting for our judgment the real truth of what happened. But of course she can’t give us the real truth, any more than she could give it in court; the real truth is hidden in the heart of her sibling, the one she never stops calling “James Elward.”