Short story: “Summer Break”

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“Summer Break,” by Mandy DeGeit

Appeared in LampLight Volume I Issue I, September 2012; read by the author on YouTube 

568 words

Funny, but the ending is a little too easy and obvious. Also, the fact that she lives right next to a school could be clearer.

I like the opening. It’s very convincing in suggesting that the main character has escaped something truly horrible.

I think the section break before the last two paragraphs is a typo.

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