Short story: “Into Your Life It Will Creep”
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“Into Your Life It Will Creep,” by Susan Daitch
Appeared in Black Clock, issue no. 19, winter 2014/spring 2015, pages 10 through 13 including title page
3 pages, maybe 2,000 words? (Edit: I was close—1,917!)
I was immediately drawn in by the writing, but I came away feeling perplexed. Maybe this story is about an individual rejecting explanations for an upsetting event, resisting the urge to label it as abnormal. He’s surrounded by seeming randomness and confusion, and accepting a neat explanation ought to be comforting, but he rejects it anyway. I’m not sure. If the story is about him choosing chaos over control and order, why does he seem to resent the confusion of two similar names? Or is that the point at which he makes his choice?
Unlike the other passengers, the geneticist is introduced with the definite article, as though we’ve heard of him before. It’s odd and abrupt.