Short story: “Deer”
by look i have opinions
“Deer,” by James Pouilliard
Appeared here on Boston Review, September 30th, 2013
This is really good. The repetition of the word “waste” works well. I think it’s easy to overdo that kind of thing, to drive home that sense of unity a little too hard.
Not asking for much kept me safe. There was nothing else to recommend the habit, just that.