Short story: “The White Cat”
by look i have opinions
“The White Cat,” by Julianna Spallholz
This is good stuff.
Opinions seem to vary on whether long, comma-sprinkled sentences read as “fast” or “slow,” but it’s undeniable that they read as breathless and uncontrolled.
A neat line: “I remember that they looked at me tenderly but that their asses gave them away, shifting around in their chairs uncomfortably, pitying me.”